Dear Neon Phom,
have you ever read a book that wasn't the bible? You should. You should expose yourself to some good storytelling and learn how to spell words that don't appear in the bible, "chaplain" for example. You did your faith and yourself a disservice by publishing "Ordinary Nagas with Exceptional Stories". You are being disrespectful with the people you wrote about. They deserve to see their stories well told. Instead, you scribbled them down like a first-grader.
You are being disrespectful with your readers, too. They are intelligent enough to arrive at a conclusion on their own, but you tell them the stories' message twice before and once after each story, and then again at the end of the book. You treat your readers as if they were idiots.